Tuesday, March 4, 2008

My HomeWork !!!!! Shardae Carroll

1st Person-Main Character

We where young , didn't know anything about life , just living it as it goes by. I miss the three of us we were best friends for life , always there for each other and never leaving anyone behind. If i could go back and change everything i would . Now i just gotta hang in here in the neighborhood " jaburey" .

1st Person-Secondary Character

I Was Just Sitting there in shock , never thought it would end like this or even happen at all . My world collapsed , my "crush" betrayed and my best friend was gone . My world was dark , very dark in " elm wood city "......

3rd Person-Omniscient

It was if she was drowning , she made a noise that sounded like a kid choking . She looked at me and smile and told me to promise and i did .

3rd Person-Observer

She splattered to the ground like a lifeless doll . Rain drops fell as the sun watch the birds take flight . she was beautiful and should of had a chance .

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