Wednesday, March 12, 2008

Aquil McIntyre First Draft Sumthin Real Nice

Sweat drips from his face, as he reaches for the money out of the captains pocket. "Sloowly, Sloowy" he says while reaching with such presetion. Suddenly a loud groun from his comes from his stomach. He suddenly Snatches the money and runs as the captain chases after him. The captain chases him trough the talest mountains till they both run out of breath and get lost. As they search for their way back home, they both run into each other. " heres your money" the man says to the captain with a look of suspension on his face. "we have to find our way home" the captain says. The homeless man says " the only way im going show you how to get home if you give me some of that money you have. "NO!" the captain says we will both die out here if you do not show me home...... To be Contiued

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