Black-short story -FINALE DRAFT

The lighting was bright. The scenery was dark. The air smelled of sea water, and I was floating. You tell me where I was at. I was hoping I was dreaming, but I pitched myself. I was stuck in the middle of the ocean. My mother and I had gone on a cruise. Everything was good, until the last day. The day everyone was due back, was the day everything went black. The last thing I remember was my mother putting me in a raft, and saying everything was gonna be okay” she’ll catch up to me later. I new she wasn’t going to catch up no time soon. Ten minutes before this moment the boot went “AWALL”. Everyone stared running, and everything came crashing down. There were about seven emergency rafts, and my mother had got one of them. About two hours later I ended up where I am now-stuck. What was a ten year-old suppose to do in this world. Questions where going through my mind like ‘Where was my mother at, why would she leave me, why didn’t she come with me?”. These questions were eating my skull alive. Wat was I to do? Where was I to go? Right then and there I broke into a loud scream. AHHH……..
When I woke up it was mourning. I was floating on this raft. The air smelled of salt water. I missed my mom. I saw that I had on blue jeans and a pink shirt. What is may name? “OH MY GOSH I FORGOT MY NAME” I screamed. I notice there was a bulge in my pocket. I reached in my pocket and pulled out a picture of my mother and I. The sundress my mother had on was lovely, and my mother was just so beautiful. I had on a yellow shirt with jeans on. I turned the picture backwards and saw that it said “TO: KATHY, LOVE: MOMMY” I guess I’m Kathy. I missed my mom. As I sat there and felt sorry for myself, I felt something move underneath me. I looked below ma and saw nothing. BOOM! There it goes again. I looked toward the side of me and saw a floating triangle. “OH MY GOSH” is what came to my mind. Please do not let that e what I think it is. BOOM! There it goes again. Peww…….. is what I heard. That’s when I notice that the sound was coming from the raft. It was a hole in it, and it was losing air-fast. BOOM! I was never so scared in my whole life. As my raft got smaller I notice three things floating around me. They were sharks I think. Watever it was I wasn’t trying to find out. When my raft lost all air, I started floating away from it. AHHHH… my leg. AHHH…..... my arm. Blood was everywhere and I was numb. The next thing I know life itself went black.