Patrick McNally: monologue

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I know its alot of responsibilty but i wont let you down mom and dad. I know its a living thing and needs care. I'll take it for walks and clean its poop and bath it and feed it. Fine ill make sure it stays off the couch. i have to walk it at night? It wont go on the carpet. What if im sleeping? im not waking up to walk it... no no no no no ill take it for walks don't worry. I'm so excited to finally get a dog!
Aw look how cute it is! its wagging tail cute nose and little paws. i want this one. We can get it?! YAY!! What mom? Oh, i think im going to name it chester. Can i let him run around the house? ok. Look how excited he is. OH NO!!! CHESTER NOT ON THE COUCH. EWW. Now i have to clean this up. bad chester.

" A Girls Dream " (Teen Monologue , Female)

(Intro) Jordin(girl) had dreams to become a performer, but her mother doesn't approve of it because of the critics and rumors that come with it and plus she doesn't want her daughter to get caught up in the fame . Jordin trys to convince her mom to let her go to American idol to show off her talents.



Jordin : Mom can you PLEASE let me audition, This is MY dream , my everything , when you was a little girl didn't you have a dream ? wasn't your heart set on something ? Without this I'm nobody, This is the reason my heart still beats. Mom this is my passion and i wanna show it ! you have to let me audition please mom ??..........FORGET CRITICS AND RUMORS ! i can handle it ! im a strong human being mother . (Jordin starts crying ) This is my life , All i want to do is change people lives with My music and My voice , Does that mean anything to you ???.... i wanna be that Somebody that every little girl or boy looks up to , i know my voice and music could change the would mom , Just please I'm begging you let me be that somebody ,let me be that next Mariah or Kelly Clarkson Please mom ? let me be Jordin Sparks......

"Please" (Teen Monologue, Female) *desperate*

Shay is in a life/death situation. With a robber trying to stick her up with a gun, she pleads for her life and tries to use reverse psychology to make the robber feel bad. At the end of all of this the robber does an unpredictable thing and lets her go!


SHAY: I gave you my purse, now please just leave alone! PLEASE…. I’m asking you nicely, don’t do this. I’m a good kid….really. I have a 3.9 grade point average, I attend school everyday, and I’m on the honor society. PLEASE.. I’m begging you! Literally.. Please…I’ll do whatever you want me to do just please don’t shoot me. If you want, we can go to the bank, and I’ll take a deposit out for you. Please sir! What kind of person sticks up a teenage girl….like……your life must really suck or you must really be going though some things to really do this. Is your life that worthless? How are you going to feel in the mourning when all this is over? Are you really going to be satisfied at the end of all this? Don’t you have a guilty conscience? Please sir…I’m on my hands and knees begging you to don’t do this. I promise that I wont tell anybody about are encounter, just as long as nothing happen here tonight……I promise. If not for me, do it for yourself. Make yourself feel better by doing an good deed, and make me feel better knowing that I still have my life sir….Thank you sir. You doing the right thing.

Survivle of the Fitest

He waites, looking for his next victim as his stomach grouns from hunger pains. Sweat drips from his face, as he reaches for the money out of the elderly mans pocket. "Sloowly, Sloowy" he says while reaching with such presetion. Suddenly a loud groun from his comes from his stomach. He suddenly Snatches the money and runs as the elderly man trys to chase after him but becomes very short of breeth. He forces hisself to stop, as the boy gets away with the cash. While whipping sweat from his face, a slight emmotin of joy overcomes his contious. He shouts "YES i can finally eat to chill my hunger pains". He walks into the deli and orders what he would like to have and leaves. The next day comes and hunger fills his stomach, he's back on the hunt because until he gets this money he dont get to eat. Only 16, since leaving his foster parents home a month pryer,he didnt want to have to live in this eveiroment his whole life. His sits back and thinks on how he could get his hands on alot of money and fast. All kind of thoguths runs threw this young man mind afriad of going to jail. He walks to his friends house, to see if he could front him some drugs to sell, just to hold him for a couple of days. When he gets there he saw one of the guns that he loved to hold for him when he got into somthing. Thats when he asked can he have the gun, and also have some drugs to sell? Being one of his closest friends he accepted, and asked him was he humgry, and did he wanted to stay with him? Yeah sure i wanna stay here for a lil bit till i can get back on my feet. Later on that night he reaches for his gun and heads out of the door with no regard on whats gonna happen to anybody that gets in the way of him making money. He gets there feins pace up and down block to see if they can copp. Money is coming threw on a steady pace, just when a man pulls up in a car and says " what you doing here, you got 5 mins to get off this corner boy" and rode off. Taron saying to himself naw this the most money i've seen in a while im not going anywhere. so a couple of minutes goes by and all of a sudden a car come flying down the street and shoots was fired at taron as he doges out of the way. When he gets back at his friends house to tell him what happen, suddenly his friend pulls out a gun and points it at his head... To be Continued

Lean On Myself

I am constantly being pushed and shoved to go this way and that way. For so many years I have allowed people to influence my decisions. Only at the end when I had no one by my side, just because I did not listen to them, I realize that there was one person I can trust, MYSELF.

In the middle of my year at Brooks High I constantly got good grades until I met this boy. But this boy wasn't just any boy; this was Chance Brown. He was a tall and very handsome boy. Chance was in the 11Th grade at the time and I was in the 10Th. When this boy came around me I felt completely weak inside. Chance had been a bad boy for the longest and I liked it.

" Hey Eternity, wanna come over to my house tonight." I thought, " Oh my God, the most gorgeous man I've met all my life has just invited me to his house." I quickly responded "Yes I would love to." He walked me home and kissed me gently on my lips. My mind went completely blank. I ran into the house and up to my room. I had to find the best outfit ever.

I went to my closet and pulled out the tightest pants and my favorite hot pink V-neck shirt. If you got it flaunt it, right. I asked my mother if I could go over Shawnna's house for a slumber party knowing that I was going with Chance. I threw on a couple of jewelry from my mom's jewelry box. She's not home plus this kind of diamonds are not for a nursing uniform.

I put on my mini jean jacket and ran on out the door. On the way to Chance's house my heart was racing like crazy. I knocked on the door and opening the door was Chance looking all sexy and good. He invited me in to watch a movie and in seconds he was all over me.

" Chance, please stop, I'm not really ready for all this," I said in a soft voice. He stopped and looked at me real hard and just kept going. I pushed him off and fixed my shirt which he tried to take off.

" I thought you were a woman not a girl," he said and I felt like he was staring through my soul. I headed for the door and he hurt me by grabbing my wrist.

" Chance let me go please," I begged.

" Look you ain't leaving 'til I get what I want" said Chance with fire in his eyes. I managed to escape and I kicked him between his legs and ran out. I knew I was wrong and could never tell anyone about what happened 'til this day. I have kept this terrible secret and this my first time discussing it.

fiction

It all started on a regular cold fall day. My brothers and my dad were playing video games, my mom was in the kitchen cooking and I was in my sanctuary, my room! I felt safe in my room away from my brothers who were always doing things to get on my nerves, you know like taking my things and going crazy, yet always getting away with it, always talking about my insecurities. But anyway this one particular story starts out horrible, and not everything that starts sad has a happy ending. Keep that in mind.

Ok so this I knew I was going to have a bad day. I knew it because when I got out of bed I tripped and fell over my sneaker and when I went to brush my teeth toothepaste fell in my eye. Then I went down to breakfast and my brothers finished the last bit of milk. Have you ever felt like this, you know like nothings going your way, well that wasn't the end of it. So my brothers leave me to eat alone and they disappear, so that was the best part of my day. After I finished making and eating breakfast I go up to my room and guess who was there? My brothers the three of them. They werent just in there they were throwing my stuffed animal, pillows and clothes everywhere!!! I went to my parents room and yelled get your kids! My mom was telling me "to calm down and relax i'll take care of it"(but in spanish) and I shot back "no you won't take care of me, you always say you will, but don't!" She gave me a stare that send me flying back to my room, i slammed the door shut and started to clean up the mess. As I was cleaning I was mumbling "why can't they just go away and not come back!!" I finished cleaning and went out to the backyard and just stared up at the sky. I tripped over a soccer ball and bumped my head on a chair, then woke up to my annoying brothers yelling back and forth at each other.

I went into the kitchen but instead saw my mom cooking. So I said "didn't I just here your sons yelling?" She said "yeah they ran upstairs and they went to there rooms." I ran upstairs to make sure they weren't in my room, but they weren't they were in there own rooms, although there was something strange about my room. I head something mumbling when I looked around I saw my favorite teddy bear winnie the pooh with his red shirt, just pacing the corner. I looked, and stared in amazement. Then he noticed me and turned and smiled and said hi Michelle. I looked at him and picked him up he was so much heavier than this morning! I put him back down and sat on my bed and thought for what felt like forever and he nudged my knee and said "why are you always so sad?" I said "my brothers ruin everything and my parents don't seem to understand." He responded "well life with out them can be hard" I say "how would I know?" Winnie smiled at me and said "if you walk through that door go to the kitchen and get me some honey, come back and you will see the difference." I say "what's the honey for?" He responds " I'm hungry." I go and do what he says.

I come back up and give Winnie the honey then I go looking for my brothers, miraculously they were really gone. I sat on the couch, turned the T.V. on ,and layed back. I was watching T.V. and fell asleep thinking about the bump on my head. I had a dream and my brothers were all running around the house having fun and being silly. Then one of them called out in my direction, but when I reached out they didn't know who I was. I had to watch another girl who looked almost like me hug them and pay with them the way I used to do, when I wasn't mad at them of course.

I woke up and just brushed the dream off. I decided that since my broithers weren't hime I could go out and come and find my room the same I left it. I went for a walk, just to see if something had cfhanged. But no, nothing I went to my friends house and she wasn't home so I kept walking until I got tired. I decided to go back home and take a bath and relax. I felt like it was all a dream, I came home, and my parents were watching T.V. as if nothing happened. My asked me if I was hungry, I responded yeah I want pizza. My mom ordered while I went to take a bath, when I came out it was so quite, usually my brothers would be fighting over the first slice of pizza, but they weren't. I walked downstairs in my purple slippers and began to eat I WAS SOOO BORED! I wanted something to laugh at, I needed something to laugh at. I began to think

about my brothers and how much I truly did like them around. I

I went back up and started talking to Winnie, who was sitting on my bed. He looked up at me and said "not already?" I said "what do you mean?" He said "I knew you couldn't las long without your brothers but its only been half a day." Then my parents walked in and asked if everything was ok? I said sure and they said ok and reluctantly left. I turned to the bear and asked "why don't they notice that there kids wre missing?" He said "because they are gone, just like you wanted and with your brothers gone you get all the attention and your parents only care about you!" I picked him and said "bring them back!" He said "no, there is no way I'll bring them back, there is no way to do it, even if I wanted to !!" I began to cry realizing that I had wished my brothers away and now I was sad and felt guilty, how could this happen to me? And you see they never came back and for that now I do think about what I say and the consequences.

Black-short story -FINALE DRAFT

The lighting was bright. The scenery was dark. The air smelled of sea water, and I was floating. You tell me where I was at. I was hoping I was dreaming, but I pitched myself. I was stuck in the middle of the ocean. My mother and I had gone on a cruise. Everything was good, until the last day. The day everyone was due back, was the day everything went black. The last thing I remember was my mother putting me in a raft, and saying everything was gonna be okay” she’ll catch up to me later. I new she wasn’t going to catch up no time soon. Ten minutes before this moment the boot went “AWALL”. Everyone stared running, and everything came crashing down. There were about seven emergency rafts, and my mother had got one of them. About two hours later I ended up where I am now-stuck. What was a ten year-old suppose to do in this world. Questions where going through my mind like ‘Where was my mother at, why would she leave me, why didn’t she come with me?”. These questions were eating my skull alive. Wat was I to do? Where was I to go? Right then and there I broke into a loud scream. AHHH……..
When I woke up it was mourning. I was floating on this raft. The air smelled of salt water. I missed my mom. I saw that I had on blue jeans and a pink shirt. What is may name? “OH MY GOSH I FORGOT MY NAME” I screamed. I notice there was a bulge in my pocket. I reached in my pocket and pulled out a picture of my mother and I. The sundress my mother had on was lovely, and my mother was just so beautiful. I had on a yellow shirt with jeans on. I turned the picture backwards and saw that it said “TO: KATHY, LOVE: MOMMY” I guess I’m Kathy. I missed my mom. As I sat there and felt sorry for myself, I felt something move underneath me. I looked below ma and saw nothing. BOOM! There it goes again. I looked toward the side of me and saw a floating triangle. “OH MY GOSH” is what came to my mind. Please do not let that e what I think it is. BOOM! There it goes again. Peww…….. is what I heard. That’s when I notice that the sound was coming from the raft. It was a hole in it, and it was losing air-fast. BOOM! I was never so scared in my whole life. As my raft got smaller I notice three things floating around me. They were sharks I think. Watever it was I wasn’t trying to find out. When my raft lost all air, I started floating away from it. AHHHH… my leg. AHHH…..... my arm. Blood was everywhere and I was numb. The next thing I know life itself went black.

Black-short story

The lighting was bright. The scenery was dark. The air smelled of sea water, and I was floating. You tell me where I was at. I was hoping I was dreaming, but I pitched myself. I was stuck in the middle of the ocean. My mother and I had gone on a cruise. Everything was good, until the last day. The day everyone was due back, was the day everything went black. The last thing I remember was my mother putting me in a raft, and saying everything was gonna be okay” she’ll catch up to me later. I new she wasn’t going to catch up no time soon. Ten minutes before this moment the boot went “AWALL”. Everyone stared running, and everything came crashing down. There were about seven emergency rafts, and my mother had got one of them. About two hours later I ended up where I am now-stuck. What was a ten year-old suppose to do in this world. Questions where going through my mind like ‘Where was my mother at, why would she leave me, why didn’t she come with me?”. These questions were eating my skull alive. Wat was I to do? Where was I to go? Right then and there I broke into a loud scream. AHHH……..
When I woke up it was mourning. I was floating on this raft. The air smelled of salt water. I missed my mom. I saw that I had on blue jeans and a pink shirt. What is may name? “OH MY GOSH I FORGOT MY NAME” I screamed. I notice there was a bulge in my pocket. I reached in my pocket and pulled out a picture of my mother and I. The sundress my mother had on was lovely, and my mother was just so beautiful. I had on a yellow shirt with jeans on. I turned the picture backwards and saw that it said “TO: KATHY, LOVE: MOMMY” I guess I’m Kathy. I missed my mom. As I sat there and felt sorry for myself, I felt something move underneath me. I looked below ma and saw nothing. BOOM! There it goes again. I looked toward the side of me and saw a floating triangle. “OH MY GOSH” is what came to my mind. Please do not let that e what I think it is. BOOM! There it goes again. Peww…….. is what I heard. That’s when I notice that the sound was coming from the raft. It was a hole in it, and it was losing air-fast. BOOM! I was never so scared in my whole life. As my raft got smaller I notice three things floating around me. They were sharks I think. Watever it was I wasn’t trying to find out. When my raft lost all air, I started floating away from it. AHHHH… my leg. AHHH…..... my arm. Blood was everywhere and I was numb. The next thing I know life itself went black.

Portfolio Requirements

Portfolio is due Friday, 3/28

Choose your two best (revising as necessary) for publication.
1. Narrative 1
2. Narrative 2
3. Short fiction story 1

I. Cover Page
1. Titles of both stories.
2. Bottom left:
a. Name
b. Date
c. Period

II. Page 1
1. Title of Story 1
2. 1-2 sentence summary
3. Explanation of what you think you did particularly well in this narrative.

4. Title of Story 2
5. 1-2 sentence summary
6. Explanation of what you think you did particularly well in this narrative.

III. Story #1
1. Title centered at the top
2. Double-spaced
3. Font size 12

IV. Story #2
1. Title centered at the top
2. Double-spaced
3. Font size 12

V. Self-Assessment
1. Use the rubric provided to assess your first narrative.
2. Give yourself a grade in each area of the rubric and explain why.
3. Give yourself an overall grade for the narrative (pluses and minuses are acceptable).

4. Use the rubric provided to assess your second narrative.
5. Give yourself a grade in each area of the rubric and explain why.
6. Give yourself an overall grade for the narrative (pluses and minuses are acceptable).

My Adventure by Olivia Williams

I noticed it was a lot of people there. How could I not. I walked through the crowds of people saying my hellos and goodbyes. I was excited. I couldn't believe I was doing this. But it was something I dreamed about for many years. I jumped into this box-like thing, press a couple buttons, and bloom I was in a different world. This world was like no other I had been to. It was the darkest world. I walked around and saw all the features to this world. The buildings were crumbing as they stood tilted over. The people were weird. They walked like mummies with a hunched back. They never spoke. As I was walking some weird creature flow down, grab me, and picked me up. I tried to fight, but it was no use. The creature flow me around for 10 minutes and then dropped me. I fell and hit a hard ground. The man that stood 20 feet high told me "You don't belong here." I got scared and started to run. The man started to chase me. I ducked into the hide out. When I felt like I was safe, I fell asleep. When I woke up I could see the sun never rose. This is truly a dark world I thought to myself. I told myself I couldn't stay here and that I had to leave. I got into the box-like thing, press a couple buttons, and bloom. But I did not go any where. I then realize I was going to be here forever. I went back to my hide out and planned out what I was going to do next. I decide I would plan my life here. I built my house made of straws, wood, and bricks. I lived in there for the rest of my life. Every now and then I try to go back home but it does not work. So I just give up.

MY STORY BY: DONTE POLITE

Donte Polite
Leo Mullen
6th P.D.
3/13/08

Narrator:
He was upset about many things. Mainly because he could go any where but couldn’t save her no matter what. He really loved her and keeps beating himself up about it. He was extremely depressed and angry at himself because of his inability to save the main woman in his life, his mother.

It was June the 2nd and Max was awaking from a long and deserved rest. He was extremely worn out from all his traveling back and forth. Max really wants to be able to see his mother again. She died which means she left him permantely. The guy could have let her go when he had the car but he shot her and speed off. The police didn’t look hard enough to him. They only spent a few months on the search, and then called a quits which mad him angry. He thinks they were lazy because a few months was nothing because that was his mother and his life. When he found out they called the search off he stop relying on the police for help.

(2years later). One day max was walking down an alley way and was thinking about his fifth birthday party and in a flash he was there. He was at the location and knew this was strange because he saw himself sitting at the table cutting the cake. While he was lurking in the shadows and many people walked past him and didn’t say anything. The longer he stood and gazed at himself the more attention he drew and the more people started asking who was he and why was he just standing there looking lost. People started to ask questions and he left. He ran outside and took off. When he thought he was safe to stop and catch his breath he did. Next he started thinking how did I get here and is this real? Next he started thinking about being home and once again he took off in a flash and was there. He went into his house up to his room and started thinking very philosophical questions. One for instance was can one travel through time? If so what were the consequences of this little ability and the punishment for doing such a thing? He laid down and next he thought about that day and was it possible to travel back and see his mom? Can he travel anywhere in the world and go to anytime, the more he thought about this the more wild his imagination ran.

(10 years later). He started to doze off, at first it was a dream then turned into a nightmare because he can remember that day as if it was nothing. He woke up in a puddle of sweat. It was around two thirty and he had learned to control his abilities and had determined that this was a present from God to sort of make up for his losses and his horrible remembrance of that day. Many times Max has thought about traveling back in time and every time he gets closer to doing it. Today he decided he will. He thought about the day before that terrible scene and bam…………. He was there. He spent the whole day watching his mom and himself and had so much fun. He knew what was going to happen so he wanted to stop it from happening. Without thinking about the consequences he hatched a plan to make his mom take a different route home. So the next day he stole a police car and created a roadblock which made his mom take a different route as he planned. Everything was going good so far except for the lighting that struck the road and cracked the bridge. Once max seen this he speed up and rushed over to the slipping car which held his mom and himself. When he reached the car he hopped out and pulled open the car door to get himself out. He got himself out first because he was closest. Once he pulled himself to safety he reached back to get his mom but the part she was had collapsed and max in the future and his mom had fallen they landed right in the water and started sinking. The car hit the floor first and no matter how hard Max pulled the door it wouldn’t open. He struggled and used all his might but he got nothing he seen his mom start to drown and this angered him. He kept trying but it was worthless and didn’t make a difference. Then out of the blue he was sent back to his room and was soaked. He was angry because he had just lost his mom again and he even changed something so he wouldn’t lose her, but it didn’t work. Then he thought maybe this gift wasn’t something good but a curse. He went down stairs and out the door to get some air. Once he was down stairs he noticed that everything has changed in away. The future isn’t the same way that it was when he left. It seemed as though slavery had been brought back, but the masters where evil dictators. Max knew he had to go back and stop himself from changing the way his mother died. The only thing was he didn’t know if he had the strength to go back and see his mother when he knew that he had to see her die. So he finally mustered up the courage to travel back. When he got there he saw himself and grabbed him and pulled him into an alley way. He told him the whole story and how he couldn’t save his mom because when he does the future will change. Max spent the whole time arguing with himself and getting angry that he couldn’t save his mom. Max and his now future- past self traveled back to the future and when he got there he looked out the window and everything seemed fine. At first everything felt fine. Then all of a sudden he noticed that there couldn’t be two future selves in the future and he couldn’t kill himself because he didn’t know what would happen so now lies a dilemma, one that could and probably has changed the future yet again.

Dear Friend ( by Shardae Carroll)

We were young , didn't know anything about life , just living it as it goes by. I miss the three of us; we were best friends for life , always there for each other and never leaving anyone behind. If i could go back and change everything i would . Now i just gotta hang in here in Aerobiea .
In Aerobiea 2004 i remembered it so clearly , She splattered to the ground like a lifeless doll . Rain drops fell as the sun watched the birds take flight . she was beautiful and should of had a chance . Her Name Was Victoria she was my best friend , always there through good times and bad. No one could keep us apart , not even the orphanage that we lived in . The orphanage was a cold dead place . It had no life and no hope . the floors creek and the walls fell . The caretakers didn't really do anything we left when we wanted to and came back when we wanted to . They didn't care about us they just wanted the money . Each and every child had a reason of being there . My reason was because my parents left me in a park and never came back . My name is Shaerah but my friends call me sha . My friend Victoria was here because her dad was abusing her and her mom physically and her mom wouldn't leave her dad , so she choose between victoria and her father , can you take a guess who she chose ? Victoria was troubled she stole and selled anything she could find for money . We had a addition to our group; his name was Christopher but we called him chris . no one knows his story of how he got to the orphanage and he never wanted to talk about it . He was sweet and smart and listened to all our problems and always tried to cheer us up . We stick together here is Aerobeia because it's so dangerous in the streets , every day someone is getting killed or locked up . It's a usual thing to see around here . Victoria was the one that always got in trouble and stayed in trouble . I was the shy one and chris was the excited one all the time . Victoria started to change her life around and do good things . She didn't steal anymore or anything all because of chris and i . We encourage each other to make it to the top . One day Chris , Victoria and i was in our rooms , we shared it . Chris said he had to tell us something so we told him to say whatever is on his mind . He told us how he wasn't suppose to be here and how he ran away from home he told us how he was rich but wanted to live like us and be normal . We asked why would he wanna be like us ? he said because he didn't want to be treated like a king or something . we looked at him with disgust we would die to be in his shoes and out this neighborhood . After he told us Victoria and i didn't speak to him for about 2 weeks . It was a sunny day in the afternoon on a monday me and victoria was walking in the park and we saw chris . he tried to apologize again but we tried to ignore him . while we walked pass him victoria and i was talking about going to college even though we both was only 15 but we wanted to plan ahead and get our life straight . Before this all happen victoria didn't trust anyone but now she trust chris and i , we was proud of her for passing that step . While me and victoria was talking we got distracted by a black lexus that rode down the block with a gun pointing out the window we knew it was a drive by . we ran so fast but the bullet flew so quickly that the lifeless body fell to the ground bleeding a puddle , Not breathing at all . Chris and i ran towards the angel i got on my knees and held her close , chris scream for help but no one answered , no one cared . She was only 15 and finally changing her life around , but i guess death comes unexpected , you never know when it's gonna come . Then tears ran down my face like a waterfall my stomach turned and i was angry . I still remember that day like yesterday chris and i tell our children about her all the time .After victoria's death chris and i grew up and we went to gene college , chris went to study for music and i studied for Choreography after spending 4 years in college , chris proposed to me on my birthday. We got married after we found the criminal that shot victoria ,which was her father we went to trial and he got life, through the whole trial he laughed and smiled , it made me disgusted and i wanted to rip him apart but i just calmed down cause now he will suffer in jail for the rest of his life . After the whole trial and marriage , Chris and i had two children " sha" and "victoria " they are the best of friends and sisters for life . They ask me all the time about victoria and i , i tell them and every time i do i re lived the moment . My Daughters remind me so much of me and victoria and whats funny a little is my daughter victoria has the same attitude , Just like my dear friend , my sister , VICTORIA.

everybody in cw6

yall gotta read my new story
it's really really good
or so i think
don't be phased by it's length
you'll be sooo enveloped
you won't notice the difference

Quote of the Day for Thursday, 3/13

"Don't be nervous. Work calmly, joyously, recklessly on whatever is at hand...Don't be a draught-horse! Work with pleasure only." --Henry Miller

Don't forget! Draft of short fiction story needs to be posted to the web by tomorrow, Friday, 3/14.

Quote of the Day for Wesnesday, 3/12

"The conscious mind is going to suggest the obvious, the cliche, because these things offer the security of having succeeded in the past. Only the mind that has been taken off itself and put on a task is allowed true creativity." --David Mamet

Classwork: Today, you can begin typing the first draft of your short fiction story on the blog. If you "Save As Draft" you can go back into "Edit Posts" and access and change your draft from any computer with internet access.

Homework: The first draft of your fiction story needs to be posted to the blog by this Friday, 3/14.

The Least You Need to Know about Plot

• Plot is the structure of your story, the way the events unfold.
• Traditional plots have an exposition (introduction), rising action (building of suspense and conflict), climax (high point of intensity), and resolution (end of conflict).
• The plot structure must reinforce the content and its meaning.
• Plot your story by jotting down ideas, using a checklist, asking and answering questions, and/or making a diagram.

All Over A Necklace

Cherel’s face was flushed with fear and her stomach dropped. She can not believe what she has done. Cherel wanted to cry but she did not. She was so upset that she had lost that necklace. She knows Jacob will be heated.
As she was coming out of the Lazy River she felt a bit strange. Cherel looked down and noticed it was gone. She jumped and shook her hands. Her body began to heat not only from the sun beaming down on her but from the fear of dealing with the monster she will have to face in a few minutes. She walked over to her friend Nick. He knew he look weird but he could not figure out what was missing. As Cherel walked over he figured it out. He screamed, “Where’s your necklace!” She screamed back, “I lost it in the Lazy River, Give me the key to the locker!” She called Jacob and he flipped. Jacob called the owner of the theme park and had the theme park shut down. The search began.
Almost every lifeguard and everyone else that knew what Jacob did (which was a lot) were looking for the necklace. Cherel does not really know where she lost the necklace, but she would love to believe it went missing in the Lazy River. A voice came over the loud speaker and said, “No one is allowed to leave the park and walk to the nearest ride and line up.”
“Next,” yelled one of the lifeguards as the person he patted and searched moved ahead and the next person moved up. The lifeguards all thought that this was a stupid idea. Who is this girl and who is Jacob they thought. Little did they know Jacob was on his way to the park but, little did Jacob know Tiffany was there. Tiffany and Jacob have been in competition for a very long time and if Tiffany finds the necklace before Jacob, he will be ruined. Just as Jacob and Cherel met up they spotted Tiffany with the necklace in her hand on its way to her bag. Cherel ran and chased Tiffany. Jacob once again called a higher power, but this time he knew who had the necklace. Tiffany ducked in and out of lines, bathrooms, and concession stands. Cherel grew tired so she decided to take a short through the park. When she was coming out of a walkway she bumped into Tiffany. The necklace flew out of Tiffany’s bag and onto the ground. They both dove for the necklace but neither of them got it. Who would have guessed Kay was in the park too.

The snail and the panther

He was big, black, and he looked scary but I was his friend so I wasn't the only one scared of him. On a Saturday morning, it was hot so we decided to go to the jungle and relax. In the afternoon we headed to the jungle. We were going and we saw a snake on the tree and the panther started to back up and he was sweating, so I thought to myself and said he is scared of animals both small and big and the snake was the size of his pinkie. So I didn't say nothing to him and we went to the other direction. Since he was faster then me he was walking in a slow pace. So we saw another animal and this time I was testing to see if he was scared of animals. So we went next to a iguana and the iguana was scared his self but the lion did the same action he did last time. So I told him to go next to the iguana and step on it and he said no, I said why and he said because the iguana didn't do nothing to him and I said I don't care because the iguana wants to eat me so the panther decided to tell me that he is scared of animals. So I decided to give him lessons . He was scared to even fight me so I toughened him up and 2 weeks later I tested him and see if he was scared anymore so I called a bear to come and act like he is going to attack us. The bear came and the panther was not sweating and was not backing down. The bear came and try to attack me and panther ran in front of me and was about to hit bear and I told him not to. I told panther that is was a test and panther realized that he was not afraid of animals before and this time this animal was bigger than him and I told him that i was proud of him. Since that day no one messed with us

~THE WEIRDEST DREAM~

she had this weirdest dream that she had this most amazing room that no one new about. In her dream she couldn't wait to just come home to go to her room. her room did things that most rooms didn't. her room had moving floors that led to all of her high possessions like her clothes an jewelry. she had this bookshelf that if you moved a certain book the whole shelf would move just like in the movies. this led to her own secret spot were she could just sit ,think or eat with no interruptions. when she got home she decided to try on her jewelery as she was doing that some weird looking robbers took her and her jewelry she scream and screm untill some one would here her but the robbers put his hand on her mouth so no one herd her scream,buts that's when she woke up and it was all over. when she woke up she saw the same floor and the same bookshelf so she decided to do what she saw in her dream or was it a dream but before she did she then started to think about those weird looking robbers that took her but she just took her chances and did what she saw in her dream.
To be Continued...........

Natana Terra

My Demise



Her eyes were now dark with anger and hate. Those once bright green eyes that shone greatly with aniticipation. She had a smerk on her face and by her expression i could tell she was debting herself. I screamed and pleaded for her to spare my life. I felt horrible I never need anyone in my life and now mines depended on her. There chains around my wrist that bond me to the wall. I can't believe its going to end like this. We had a good friendship but after that day i couldn't take it anymore. After 9 good years of friend that day just crossed the line. The season of bitter cold was upon us. The beautiful lucious trees now fell bare. Nicole was standing outside the school doors waiting for me like always. Nicole was wearing the same coat she was wearing yesterday and the day before that. Her lumious curls fell with no effort onto her carmel brown face. She wasn't the worst person in the world but she seemed to always be around me. In my mind I just wanted to walk by and pay her no mind but instead I greeted with her with an excited,"Hi Nick!" She answered me with a "Hey"."Are you ready to go?" I asked. "Sure" she reponded. When I realized that I would have to spend the day with her always wanting to touch me and be the only person I talk to I remembered an earlier promise. "Oh wait, we can't. I promised to go to the pep rally with Jessica and the girls." I knew she hated my other friends because everytime they came into contact she made sure to let them know. "Come on do you have to go?" I stated with resitation "I promised, but you can come with you want and besides you never support the school." Nicole agreed to come. Like usual she grabbed my arm with a satisfied look on her face and we walk to meet Jessica. Jessica and the whole group of other girl disliked Nicole. They knew she was my staker and they didn't want her around. Nicole looked at Jessica and said hello. Jessica responded,"oh hi Nicole, what are you doing her, I know how you hate sports of any kind." "Ha ha funny girl" Nicole said sarcasticly. "Come you two." I said trying to hurry things up. When we started walking to the field Nicole tried to grabbed my ar again but I pulled away and started walking with my other friends. I could see Nicole out the corner of my eye and she wouldn't stop staring at me. Though my frineds and I were doing the things I know Nicole hated she still wouldn't leave. We started talking about boys and acting like sobs. "Wow, look at this place!" I said cheerfully. Jessica said,"Everyone in the school must here!" Nicole state,"I wish i wasn't here." Nicole came over to me and grabbed me by the arm and said,"Let's go." She was always trying to get me away from my friends. She hated the idea that she wasn't my only friend. "No, we just got here." I said stiffly. "Why are you being a loser?" Jessica chimed. "Oh i forgot you was here. Shut up witch." Nicole smartly snarled. The roaring court silenced completly. "Are you going to let her talk to me like that Raychole, I'm your best friend?" I saw this as an oppurtunity to tell Nicole what I truly thought about her. I mean she could be a good frined sometimes, but she was annoying and never left me alone. So, I said,"But you are." "What?" she stated in amazement. "Come on Nick, don't do this to me you're like a weirdo." Nicole's eyes filled with tears. "Is this how we are now Raychole?" She started crying franticly and ran off. At the moment I felt glad and relieved that I did what I did, but when I went home I felt sort of bad. Maybe she was a little annoying, but she never did anything wrong to me. So, I decided to apologize the next day in school. That morning I seemed to wake up on the wrong side of the bed. I woke up late so my hair looked a mess. I didn't have a decent breakfast and it was raining outside so it wouldn't make my hair any better. I walked out of the house with great confidence hoping people would pay more attention to my attitude and not what I was wearing, because by the time I got to school my clothes were completly soaked. I was on the look out for Nicole so I could ask for forgiveness and get it over with. Right before lunch I spotted Nicole out the corner of my eye watching me like always. I walked over to her and said, "Hey Nick, i'm sorry about yesturday, I didn't mean to say that to you like that." She just gave me a blank stare and blurtted out, "I love you." and walked away not looking back. I was stunned. I looked like a deer in the head lights. I stood in the same spot and stared into nothing for about 2 minutes. I went to lunch dazed. I knew I would have to end our friendship. The love she was talking about was more then friend love. I could see it in her eyes. After lunch I had a free period so I decided to go to the library and read my book. I opened the door and it creeked loudly and echoed. The place was totaly empty. I was so into my book then out of nowhere I heard, "Hello, Raychole." I quickly said, "What are you doing here?" Nicole replied,"I just wanted to spend some time with you, talk to you, but am I to much of a werido to?" "I thought I said I was sorry, you know I didn't mean it ." I hissed. "But no you did." she yelled. I couldn't take this anymore it went on for too long. "I don't have time for this" I screamed, "What is wrong with you, i'm sorry I don't want to be your girlfriend, i'm not gay!" She stared at me and stamered,"What,what are you talking about?" I couldn't hold it in I shouted, "Everyone knows that you are in love with me and i'm not gay. Because of you when we first came to high school everyone thought I was,you ruined me, I tried to be your friend but I can't, I can't believe I even apologized to you, I was just telling the truth." I soon as I finished my sentence she ran up to me and grabbed me with her hand on top of my mouth. I started screaming and yelling for help, but she pressed down even harder to muffle my screams. She dragged me into the back room where all the left over books were stored. She grabbed the chain from the door and wrapped them around my wrists and bond me to the metal loops on the wall. I felt tears come to my eyes because i knew there wasn't anything left for me to do. When I looked up she shouted at me,"You were perfect, no we were perfect together, after all this time how could you let some retarded people change your opinon of me?"I had nothing left to say."Tell me, tell me why, you know I love you, why don't you love me?, I was perfect for you, you were all the things I thought I knew, you were the only thing that was pure and right in the world, when we were together everything was right, why can't we just be?" Now I started to get frustrated. "Answer me?"she yelled. Then she turned around to get something from her bag. I knew this was it. She finally went insane. She was really going to kill me. I gave one last attempt at breaking free and my wrists came loose. I guess she underestimated the power of lotion. I took the nearest book I could reach and hit her across the face. She fell to the ground and blood started rushing down her face. I stood over her and repeatdly hit her in the head with the book. I continued until I was sure she would haunt me no longer. I looked at the book in my hand and on the spine it said Volume 20. As the blood dripped from the cover and hit the ground I woke up in my bed. I looked around my same completly white room. The color comforted me as it reminded me of that bitter season that fell upon us. The room was completly empty with nothing but myself and my bed in it. The moonlight fell upon the gates on my windows and created a shadow upon my face. I reached under my bed and pulled out a book. I turned it to the side and it read volume 20. I followed the blood trail along the cover until it disappered into the pages. I put the book back under my bed and went back to my wonderful night of sleep.

The demise of the beatiful green flower

I looked at her, her life in my hands,I smiled at the thought. She was bound to the wall and a weapond of torture was in my hands. I had planed to give her everything that she has given me. She cried and screamed and pleaded for mercy but I ignored it. So, you ask for forgiveness now? It humored me to see her like this. Someone once so strong,so amazing, and selfreliant now depended on me to spare her life. But, the question is should I? But, it wasn't always like this. Raychole and I were once friends, best friends. It was that one day, the day she crossed the line. It was the time of year where the ice crystals cascaded down from the heavens and greeted our senses with their bitter touch. I looked at the frozen ground to where those beautiful and gracious flower once stood. But now they lay on the ground wiltered and dying.I was standing at the front door of the school waiting for Raychole. She was brillant, she was everything that I wanted to be pretty, popular, and had lots of money. I still don't understand to this day why she wanted to be friends with me. I was nothing, I really wasn't pretty, I wasn't popular and my fincal situation was not that greatest.I looked at her in amazment as she walked toward me. How could you not ? I mean look at her. She had the prettiest wine red hair I have ever seen in my life, with precing green eyes. I could die a happy girl just looking in her intense eyes. Eventhough I also had green eyes, it was something special about hers. I could really see her soul. She might have not been perfect but she was to me. " hey nick" Raychole said loudly. Her voice shattered the cold I once felt ever so greatly. "hey" I said back. " you ready to go she asked". "sure" I said. " oh wait, we can't I said that I would go to the pep rally with Jessica and the girls". I hated Jessica and the girls, they were Raychole's other group of friends. They were the girls that everyone hated and no one would say it, except for me I told Jessica and her group of so called friends that I hated them everytime we came into contact. I would only hang out with them because of Raychole, she was my best friend so I would still love her no matter what or if she hung put with the wicked witches of our high school." come on do you have to go" I asked. " yes I promise" Raychole stated. "you can come if you let besides you never support the school". I wished I would have never agreed to come to that thing. That was the inton thing that broke up our friendship.I had never knew that Raychole would be like that. We walked together arm in arm to meet the wicked witches of the west. Jessica spotted us immeditly. She had a annoyed look on her face. I knew she didn't like me. She just hated the fact that I was with Raychole. She did't even like that we were friends. When we were face to face, Jessica said hi to Raychole and nothing to me. I thought that she would be at least civil but now I see that she will not. "hi Jess" I said nonchanlantaly. " oh hi Nicole, what are you doing her, I know how you hate sports of any kind". " Ha ha funny girl" i said sarcaastly. " come on you two" Raychole said. As we walked to The court yard were the rally was to be held, I noticed something different about Raychole. She has picked up some of the witches maneriscims. she would talk about boys and act like a sob.Plus she walked with the witches instead of walking arm in arm like we would always do. She left me behind for those girls. suddenly her perfection in my eyes started to demince. Her beatiful green perfect eyes were shaded with a small flim of gray, what has happened to my beatiful perfect girl? Has she been corupted by the witches? No she not,Raychole is too smart and PERFECT. The walls of my heart began to tighten at the thought she was the only perfect person in the world. I could not believe this so I let the idea escape from my head. "wow" look at this place" Raychole said louldly. " everone in the school must be here" jessica stated. " I wish I wasn't here" I said. I hated crowds. Especially when I was with Raychole, I hated the idea of someone getting more than a yard close to her, except for me. I grabbed her arm, "lets go" I said. "No we just got here"she said cheerfuly. " come on I don't feel right". " why are you being a loser" jessica said. " oh wait I forgot you are". "shut up witch" I shouted. The once lould courtyard got quite. " are you going to let her tallk to me like that Raychole , i'm your best friend, I screamed with warm tears falling down my cold face. " but you are" Raychole said. "what" I said. " please dont do this to me nick, your acting like a werido". Raychole has never said this to me in our nine years of friendship. This is how I always acted,it has never been a problem but now it is. My heart broke in a million pices, my body grew limp,. " is that how we are now Raychole" I screamed. I looked at her and stared to cry, I ran off the field. My body seemed weightless as I ran. When I got home I ran to my room. My family asked what is wrong with me but I did not answer. I just stared at the wall and thinked. What should I do, can I let her do that to me. I will get my revenge. I thought about what I could do. She deserved everything I could convice in my mind. She has made enimes with the wrong one. Out of all people me her best friend. I grew mad with ideas of torture. I knew exacly how I was going to do it and when. The next day at school I saw her with her friends, laughing, playing. Out of the corner of her eye she spotted me looking at her. She walked over to me. " hey Nick, i'm sorry about yesturday, I didn't mean to say that to you like that". I looked at her sad beatiful green eyes. Should I forgive her? She said sorry like an angel but acted like a devil. Was this apology real or fake? I just looked at her there was no words. "I love you" I said. And walked away. I did not have the courage to look back at her. For I knew the blank stare she would've gave me. And for this moment I could not take it, I cared about her to much. I still had to carry out my plan, I could never forgive her for what she has done. She broke me and now its my turn to do her. After lunch I waited til all the students went to their classes and the hall way was cleared. I knew since she had a free period she would go to the libruary. I followed her there slowly making sure that she didn't hear a single step I took. When she reached the door I hid inside the connecting hallway. When I sensed that she was inside the libuary. I stood next to the door and out of the corner of my eye saw that she was sitting peacfully reading a book. I walked into the empty libruary. "Hello Raychole" I said. "What are you doing here" she asked." I just wanted to spend some time with you, talk to you, but i'm I to much of a werido to?". " I thought I said I was sorry, you know I didn't mean it "Raychole said. " but no you did" I said. "I don't have time for this" she yelled. "what is wrong with you, i'm sorry I don't want to be your girlfriend, i'm not gay". "WHAT,what are you talking about" I said. "everyone knows that you are in love with me and i'm not gay, because of you when we first came to high school everyone thought I was,you ruined me, I tried to be your friend but I can't, I can't believe I even apologized to you, I was just telling the truth". She said in an angry voice. I looked at her my hands shook with anger. I suddlenty ran over to her and grabed her, I put my hands over her mouth to muffle her gut wreching cries. I then draged her to the back of the library and into the backroom where left over books are held. I pushed her up against the wall, and grabed the chains that were around the lock of the book closet. And put the chains around her arms and put it through the metal loops on the walls. She looked at me with tears in her eyes. I turned around to get the knife out of my bag. I suddently started to think about all the times I had with Raychole. Can I really kill the girl I love? But after everything we had been through. If she dies all of my hope in the world will be lost, but she is not even the same person anymore. Why would she do this to me? Then all of a sudden frustion got the better of me I could no longer debate myself, my mind could not simply take it. I turned around and started to scream at her. "You were perfect, no we were perfect together, after all this time how could you let some retarded people change your opinon of me?". She wimpered something and I yelled "tell me, tell me why, you know I love you, why don't you love me?, I was perfect for you, you were all the things I thought I knew, you were the only thing that was pure and right in the world, when we were together everything was right, why can't we just be?". She looked at me with rage in her eyes. "Answer me?", I could no longer wait for her answer. I looked at the knife, the sharp, smooth blade mocked me. I finally decided to do it. Out of no where a large book came towards my face. I fell to the floor. I felt hard leather on my face, I could barely open my eyes,but when I did all I saw was volume 20 repeatly comming down on my face, 20 20 20 20 20 20 20 20 20. Red ribions started to fall down my carmel brown face. My once bright green eyes were covered with red. The feeling in my face stared slowly leaving me as did my whole body. When I opened my eyes for the last time I saw Raychole on top of me.

THE WARLORD

MACDONALDS (MACDONALDS) I COULD SEE THE SIGN AS CLEAR AS DAY FROM THE PORCH OF MY HOUSE.I THOUGHT TO MYSELF, " HMMM, I HAVEN'T HAD A DOUBLE CHEESE BURGER IN AGES." IT WAS ON MY AGENDA TO GET ONE, BUT BEFORE II WOULD I HAVE HAVE TO PAY A VISIT TO MY FRIEND PATRICK. HIS HOUSE WAS ABOUT SEVEN DOORS DOWN FROM MINE SO IT WOULD BE EASY TO GET HIM ON MY WAY TO MACDONALDS. WHILE I STROLLED DOWN THE CRACKED SIDEWALK, I WAS READING A BOOK ABOUT THE BATTLE OF TROY. I WAS ALWAYS INTERESTED IN GREEK MYTHOLOGY FOR SOME STRANGE REASON. I WOULD PICTURE myself as the leader of a great army commanding them to destroy my enemies. when i would fight i wouldn't be the hero saving the day.instead, i would be a vicious tyrant set on conquering others. i would rain poison dipped arrows upon my opponents. those who would call themselves heros would be swiftly silenced. it was my dream to be an ancient warlord.

when i arrived at patricks house, i noticed that he had a new door mat. welcome(welcome) i don't know wh but the mysterious mat caught my attention. it was all black with pink letters. as i went to knock on the door i noticed that it was slightly opened.i walked inside the house and called for patrick."patrick", there was no answer. i walked into the living room and i heard a strange sound coming fron the basement. i went down to investigate, and when i got to the bottom of the stairs i was blinded by a neon portal. on the side of the portal were dials for day, month, and year. walked to the portal and set the date for 450 b.c. i walked around the portal, examining it from every angle. i wondered what was inside of the portal and what it was like back in that time period. my curiosity was getting the best of me, i just had to see what was on the other side of that portal. i went through the portal with great haste.

as i went through the threshhold, i saw a neon tunnel filled with many clocks of all sorts. the sight was frightening but i was still determained to enter. "alright here goes nothin"i said as i jumped down the bizaare tunnel. i peered down to see if i could identify anything but the light at the bottom was much too bright.

My Fiction Story By:Donte Polite

Donte Polite
Leo Mullen
6th P.D.
3/12/08

Narrator:He was upset about many things. Mainly because he could go any where in time but couldn’t save her no matter what. He really loved her and keeps beating himself up about it. He was extremely depressed and angry at himself because of his inability to save the main woman in his life, his mother.

It was June the 2nd and max was awaking from a long and deserved rest. He is extremely worn out from all his traveling back and forth. Max really wants to be able to see his mother again. She died when a guy tried to rob her car. The guy could have let her go when he had the car but he shot her and speed off. The police didn’t look hard enough to him. They only spent two months on the search, and then called a quits. He thinks they were lazy because two months was nothing because that was his life his mother. When he found out they called the search off he stop relying on the police for help. (2years later). One day max was walking down an alley way and was thinking about his fifth birthday party and in a flash he was there. He was at the location and knew this was strange because he saw himself sitting at the table cutting the cake. While he was lurking in the shadows and many people walked past him and didn’t say anything. The longer he stood and gazed at himself the more attention he drew and the more people started asking who was he and why was he just standing there looking lost. People started to ask questions and he left. He ran outside and took off. When he thought he was safe to stop and catch his breath he did. Next he started thinking how did I get here and is this real? Next he started thinking about being home and once again he took off in a flash and was there. He went into his house up to his room and started thinking very philosophical questions. One for instance was can one travel threw time? If so what were the consequences of this little ability and the punishment fordoing such a thing? He laid down and next he thought about that day and was it possible to travel back and see his mom? Can he travel anywhere in the world and go to anytime, the more he thought about this the more wild his imagination ran. (10 years later). He started to doze off, at first it was a dream then turned into a nightmare because he can remember that day as if it was nothing. He woke up in a puddle of sweat. It was around two thirty and he had learned to control his abilities and had determined that this was a present from god to sort of make up for his losses and his horrible remembrance of that day. Many times max has thought about traveling back in time and every time he gets closer to doing it. Today he decided he will. He thought about the day before that terrible seen and bam…………. He was there. He spent the whole day watching his mom and himself and had so much fun. He knew what was going to happen so he wanted to stop it from happening. Without thinking about the consequences he hatched a plan to make his mom take a differntroute home. So the next day he stole a police car and created a roadblock which made his mom take a different route as he planned. Everything was going good so far except for the lighting that struck the road and cracked the bridge. Once max seen this he speed up and rushed over to the slipping car which held his mom and himself. When he reached the car he hoped out and pulled open the car door to get himself out. He got himself out first because he was closet. Once he pulled himself to safety he reached back to get his mom but the part she was had collapsed and max in the future and his mom had fallen they landed right in the water and started sinking. The car hit the floor first and no matter how hard max pulled the door it wouldn’t open. He struggled and used all his might but he got nothing he seen his mom stat to drown and this angered him. He kept trying but it was worthless and didn’t make a difference. Then out of the blue he was sent back to his room and was soaked. He was angry because he had just lost his mom again and he even changed something so he wouldn’t loose her, but it didn’t work. Then he thought maybe this gift wasn’t something good but a curse. He went down stairs and out the door to get some air. Once he was down stairs he noticed that everything has changed in away. The future isn’t the same way that it was when he left. It seemed as though slavery had been brought back, but the masters where evil dictators. Max knew he had to go back and stop himself from changing the way his mother died. The only thing was he didn’t know if he had the strength to go back and see his mother when he knew that he had to see her die. So he finally puckered up the courage to travel back. When he got there he saw himself and grabbed him and pulled him into an alley way. He told him the whole story and how he couldn’t save his mom because when he does the future will change. Max spent the whole time arguing with himself and getting angry that he couldn’t save his mom. Max and his now future- past self traveled back to the future and when he got there he looked out the window and everything seemed fine. At first everything felt fine. The all of a sudden he noticed that there couldn’t be two future –selves in the future and he couldn’t kill himself because he didn’t know what would happen so now lies a dilemma, one that could and probably has changed the future yet again.To be continued………………………………………………………………………

Fairy God parents (Devante's way)

All I ever wanted was someone to play with. This day as i remember had changed my life. It was exactly three years ago. My new pet parrots had woke me up so i decided to get ready for school. I walked into my room and saw two fairies in my room singing to me saying something about fairy god parents. I didnt really care because I knew this would be the best thing that happend to me. They told me all of the rules and told me not to tell anyone. They said that there was this one guy named crocker who will try to snatch them up to rule the world. When they said that name my heart had sunk. I didnt know my teacher was fairy hunter OMG!!!!!!!!

My day was goin good I had wished my self to school so no school bus for me. I heard Mr crocker call me and say "how did you get here so fast" i was like gotta ride duh!!! He said go back to the luncroom. I wasnt feelin like having to stay in school. So i asked cosmic and wendy my fairy god parents to wish me a way out of school. I heard a poof and i ended up in a car being chased by the cops. I was so scared. When i wished my self back i began to ask them wat was that for. Man was i losing it. They were following me every where but i was sble to live with it until that day the world was totally changed.

Crocker had captured my god parents and wished his self to fairy world. Now everything is changing. It was my time to save the world. I took all of the gadgets i wished for and used my emergency trip to fairy world to stop crocker. Yes there he is and there go cosmic and wendy. All i have to do is find a way to destract him. " I will do it for you timmy, i will destract him so you can stop him" Ok i knew this wasnt going to work but i did it anty way YAAAAAAA !!!! I heard and i knew wat i had to do. All of a sudden i heard this big boom and AJ the fairy was vaporized in a instant. I giggled cause it was funny at the time. So i ran dodging the ray blasts coming my way and i threw my invisible cloth on. I began to attack and knock crocker on his feet. I got the orb he held cosmic and wendy in and began to get some payback. We finished crocker off and had him locked up in fairy prison. You would never want to visit him every time a fairy walks by he yells FAIRY GOD PARENTS!! Over and over again. Then i began to live the life with my two god parents and i never had a problem until the pixies , the genie, and aliens came into the our lives. But I will tell you those stories another day. HEHEHE


TH3 3ND

Both Worlds

It was 11 o'clock and Jim was chillin with his best friend Steve at Jim's house. They decided to go out to a club. As they were walking out the door, they were greated by a strange man and his friends. The strange man then swung at Jim. Jim told Steve to go get help but when Steve returned, it was to late. Little did Steve know that JIm was only beaten within an inch of his life and not dead.

The police arrived on the scene where a detective questioned Steve. Jim's mom was also there being questioned but she knew nothing. Steve was escorted to his home bu two policemen. When he got home, he heard a strange voice almost immediately. The voice sounded familiar, as if it was.... "it can't be! it's impossible." But it was possible. It was Jim! But how could it be Jim? Jim was pronounced dead on the scene. Steve didn't believe it, but he should cause it really is Jim!

As Steve heard Jim's voice, he thought "maybe he is alive!" "Where are you? Jim come out. This aint funny!" "I have no where to come out of Steve," said Jim, "I'm dead! You have to find my body Steve. Otherwise, I shall not return." "What do you mean return?" said Steve. "If you find my body, I will return to live once again." "How am I supposed to get your body back?" said Steve, "the morgue has it." "No, they don't. They were attacked after you left the scene by the group of three who attacked me." "They took it Steve and you have to find it, NOW!"

So Steve set off on his mission to find Jim. He checked all possible places were Jim may be. But he could not find him. "Hurry Steve, time is running out!" He decided to become his on little detective, questioning and searching. He finally found a trail of blood leading to the trunk of a car. He pried open the trunk to find a dead deer. The owner of the car came out, "WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY CAR!" "I found a trail of blood," said Steve, "leading to your car." " Yeah so, that doesn't mean you can brake into my car!" "Well it looked suspicious" said Steve. "Yeah I understand" said the owner of the burnt-out pinto. Two of the guys' buddies came out of the gas station where the car was parked. "What's goin' on?" "Nothin" said the owner of the car.

"Well it seems like we have a dilemma on our hands, how are you to pay for braking the lock on the trunk?" "I think I have a way." Without having time to think, Steve was struck over the head with the crowbar used to beat Jim to death. The owner of the car was the killer. Now Steve was now going to die! Maybe Steve had been tricked, maybe Jim was alive and this was all just a dream. But it wasn't! "You have failed Steve and now you will die!"

THE END

Smog Lake

It started as a normal March day. It was the first day of spring in Fogstown, which means it was the first day of the foggy season. hen the fog started that was when strange things started to occur.
Sarah and Jane were best friends, and it was the first day of spring so they made plans with other friends to go down to Smog Lake for a swim. Smog Lake got its name from the obscurring fog the hovered above it. when the children arrived they were all ready to cool down and junp in the lake. now their parents always warn them to be careful aound the lake it is dangerous but they do not listen t them anway. while they are all swimming they notice the smog is very thick today. they decide to get out and head home. while they ae swimmingJane gets stuck on something slimy. Jane screamed out to Sarah that something snagged her. Sarah tried to pull her loose buy as she did Jane let out a piercing scream. the thing around her leg had pierced into her skin. that is when it released her. sarah pulled her on dry land and checked out her leg. there were two rows of teeth marks on her calf. The teeth marks were very strange looking. there was also a strange yellow green ooze comimg out of the wounds, whatever it was had injected venom in her. Sarah took jane home and told her mom the story. when her mom chcked her leg the wounds were no longer there!!! how could the wounds have healed so fast? The thing that bit her must have been very stange.
Sarah had went home and did some research on the lake. She found out that there was a toxic waste dump nearby and they were dumping into the lake! The creature that had bit her must have been mutated by the toxic waste. Who knows What type of effects the bite could have had on her.
Spring break was over and Sarah hasn't seen Jane since the bite. When Sarah was walking to school she knocked for Jane so they could walk together. When Jane came out she looked horrible. Her skin was moist and pale green her hair was tangled and slimy. Jane didn't talk at all to Sarah on the way to school or throughout the day and during lunch she didn't even touch her food. After school Sarah saw Jane walking towards the lake. Sarah followd her and saw her enter into the water. After a moment Jane began talking outloud to herself. It seemed like someone was asking her questions. Then she dove under the water!!! She was under for about 10 minutes when something came up from the water. It was some strange monster with green flesh and webbed hands and feet with orange spots on its chest. This monster must have pulled jane under the water and eatin her. Sarah tried to get away before being spotted but the monster heard her. It darted after her and chased her all the way to the school. All the children ran and screamed. Sarah ran and was cornered. The beast stopped and looked at Sarah, then it looked at the ground and fell to its knees. When it looked up at Sarah the moster was crying....ot was Jane!!
Jane was taken to a military base where doctors and othere scientists did expierments on her and tried to decifer why this mutation happened. The lake was closed down and drained where the found tons of dead fish and bodies of missing children. But most disturbing was the fish that was in there. No one can describe how horrible it looked and was taken to the military base with Jane where they also did tests. Nobody ever heard from Jane for the rest of their lives.

Death of Jenni by: Cherissa Allan

It must have been about 3:00 AM when her face turned white as snow. She was awaken by a loud bang at her door. She went back to sleep thinking it must have been the dog. When she was awakened again she saw a man hovering over her. " Who the hell are you". She yelled. He didn't day anything, instead he began to go on top of her. she screamed for help louder than anything but no one was there. He put a pillow over her face and ripped off her clothes. After he raped her she said that she would call the police. He pulled out a gun from the bag he brought in the room and shot her.

She was 16 years old and her parents were out of town.

" Jenni we are home" yelled Mrs. Brown when she walked into her house from a trip she had with her husband. " Jenni Grammy Lisa gave me something for you. It may be a lot of money." she yelled louder as she walked near the staircase. As her husband walked in the house with a handful of bags she began to say that Jenni's Grammy always gives her money.

As Mrs. Brown walked up the stairs she noticed that Jenni's door was still closed. " That's odd, she is usually up by 10:00 watching some show on MTV". As she opened Jenni's door she screamed so loud that you could have heard it from the great wall of China.

" What happened" yelled Mr. Brown as he ran up the stairs. When he came to his daughter's room he found his wife standing over what now was his daughter's dead body. " WHAT HAPPENED" yelled even louder.

" I- I'm not sure" she stuttered. MRS. Brown began to cry when her husband began punching the wall. " I'll call the police" she said over the loud thunder of her husband. While downstairs trying to call the police MRS. Brown heard her husband throwing things and screaming " Why her lord, why my sweet little Jenni". After a couple more minutes of crying MRS. Brown called the police. They were at the house in at least five to ten minutes.

The detective on the case told the couple his name and asked them what they had saw. MR. and MRS. Brown told the police where they were and what happened when they had gotten home. "Do you know who could have done this to your daughter" asked Detective Roberts as his partner, detective O'Hara, searched the home for some clues. The couple tell the detective that they were not sure who would kill a sweet girl like Jenni. They said she was honest and never had sex. The detectives say goodbye to the Browns as the dead body was being taken to the morgue.

The next day the detectives had a clue of of a possible killer. At around 12:00 the detectives visited the morgue. " The victim was at least a month pregnant" said Doctor Corrine Johnson.

" Maybe the boyfriend or ex-boyfriend killed Jenni" responded detective O'Hara. Detective O'Hara walked around the morgue and thought of more possible suspects other than the boyfriend. As detective O'Hara thought of more potential suspects, detective Roberts continued to have a conversation with Doctor Corrine Johnson.

" Corrine do you have any other clues to who the suspect may have been" asked detective Roberts.The Doctor responded by saying that she had some hair samples form the killer. Detective Roberts thanked the Doctor and told detective O'Hara that it was time for them to have another visit with the Browns.

" Come in. Its nice to see you again". said MRS. Brown as she opened the door.

" What can we do for you guys this time" asked MR. Brown as the detectives walked into the living room.

" We came to ask you if you knew of any boyfriends Jenni could have had". stated detective Roberts as he sat on a chair near the front door.

" She has- I mean had a boyfriend named Lucas Rodriguez" responded MRS. Brown. She also stated that he lived in the Bronx with his mom and stepfather.

" Why do you need to know if Jenni had a boyfriend? Do you think he may be the killer?" asked MR. Brown as the detectives began to get up to leave.

Detective O'Hara told the Browns that their daughter was a month pregnant at the time of her death. MRS. Brown began to cry louder than she had the day she found Jenni's body. She yelled that who ever killed Jenni killed her grandchild shouldlive in hell for eternity . After a at least ten more minutes in the house the detectives said goodbye and told the Browns that they will call them if they have any more clues.

While driving to the home of Lucas Rodriguez, detective O'Hara began to cry and think about her own daughter, who is the same age as Jenni.

" Who are you" asked Lisa Rodriguez, mother of Lucas Rodriguez. After the detectives show her their badge she states " If your looking for Johnny he ain't here."

As Lisa Rodriguez tries to close the door the detectives say " we are here to talk to your son, Lucas." When MRS. Rodriguez finally lets them in they tell her why they want to talk to Lucas. She tells them that he was down the street playing basketball with some of his friends.

As they drove towards the park the detectives think about how Lucas would react when they tell him that his girlfriend and unborn child was killed. " Yo, any of you guys know a boy named Lucas Rodriguez" asked detective Roberts as they entered the park.

" Yhea, who you" responded one of the men sitting on a bench with what seemed like his son. The detectives told him who they were and the reason they wanted to speak to Lucas. The man told the detectives where Lucas was and that he was Lucas' father.

"Yo, Lucas come over here, some people want to speak to you about your girl Jenni" yelled MR. Rodriguez.

"What up" responded Lucas as he ran toward the detectives.

"Um. where very sad to tell you this but your girlfriend has been killed last night and she was a month pregnant". said detective O'Hara with a crock in her voice. " We'll also like to ask you where you were around 3:30 AM and we'll like to take a sample of your hair"

" Do you really think I'll kill my girlfriend and my unborn child" yelled Lucas so everyone in the park could here him. " You can have a sample of my hair but it'll come up negative". he said after he calmed down.

After crying he told the detectives of a possible suspect, a young man named Jason Smith, who could have killed Jenni. Lucas told the detectives that Jenni told Jason she was not interested in him. He also told them that Jason said to Jenni, " you are going to regret this , remember my words." Lastly he told them that Jason lives a house away from Jenni.

Lucas' hair was not a match to the hair found on Jenni.

After getting information from Lucas the detective rushed to Judge Ambles and asked her for an arrest warrant.

" You raped her so she could see what she missed out and you killed her because you thought no other guy should be with her, didn't you didn't you answer me" yelled Detective.

" I killed her alright" yelled Jason. " She didn't have a right to talk to me the way she did. And Lucas he's Puerto Rican..... He don't belong here" yelled Jason even louder.

Jason was sent to jail an hour after his confession. He didn't know that Jenni was a month pregnant at the the time. A couple of days later he was let out on bail until his court hearing and was shot to death by Lucas Rodriguez- Jenni's boyfriend.

Lucas yelled " You son of a b you killed my girlfriend so you deserve to die. You got to go to hell and burn for life".

Lucas was sent to jail after they found out that he killed Jason and he also got death for his crime.

The snail and the panther

He was big, black, and he looked scary but I was his friend so I wasn't the only one scared of him. On a Saturday morning, it was hot so we decided to go to the jungle and relax. In the afternoon we headed to the jungle. We were going and we saw a snake on the tree and the panther started to back up and he was sweating, so I thought to myself and said he is scared of animals both small and big and the snake was the size of his pinkie. So I didn't say nothing to him and we went to the other direction. Since he was faster then me he was walking in a slow pace. So we saw another animal and this time I was testing to see if he was scared of animals. So we went next to a iguana and the inguana was scared hisself but the lion did the same action he did last time. So I told him to go next to the iguana and step on it and he said no, I said why and he said because the iguana didn't do nothing to him and I said I dont care because the iguana wants to eat me, so the panther admitted to me to that he was sacred of other animals. I was thinking and said to myself size doesn't mean nothing. So I started to give panther some lessons to fight and he toughend up. So on our way home a bear was trying to attack me and panther beat the bear up and since that day nobody messed with me or panther.

Aquil McIntyre First Draft Sumthin Real Nice

Sweat drips from his face, as he reaches for the money out of the captains pocket. "Sloowly, Sloowy" he says while reaching with such presetion. Suddenly a loud groun from his comes from his stomach. He suddenly Snatches the money and runs as the captain chases after him. The captain chases him trough the talest mountains till they both run out of breath and get lost. As they search for their way back home, they both run into each other. " heres your money" the man says to the captain with a look of suspension on his face. "we have to find our way home" the captain says. The homeless man says " the only way im going show you how to get home if you give me some of that money you have. "NO!" the captain says we will both die out here if you do not show me home...... To be Contiued

Which Me by Alexis

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!
Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god!
WHAT IS THIS!!
I know I didn’t do this.
Did I? No! I couldn’t have.
It wasn’t me.
Yea- that’s it! But exactly who was it?

It all started when I was walking the cold streets of Central Philadelphia. It had to be about 4:30 in the morning. All I can remember is it being cold, but people were still out. All I seem to remember is feeling light-headed and a little burning in my chest. From what, I have no clue. There were blurred lights all around and horns, and buses, and lights. Flashing lights all around me. Man, these lights were everywhere. That’s the most significant thing I remember from that night. That night, was March 4, and now it is March 19, and I don’t know where I have been for those missing days or what I have been doing. All I know is I didn’t do this. I couldn’t have.
I’m scared. What will I tell the police when they come? They’re gonna start asking questions. Neighbors are going to start asking questions. Then, news reporters are gonna harass me to ask questions. Oh My God! What am I gonna do about this? What can I do?
I’m panicking. I don’t know what to do, and it’s starting to smell badly in here. I woke up to this smell. I hope no one outside this house can smell this. I wonder.
Trash is everywhere, and my home is in disarray. I don’t know what I’m going to do. I keep getting these killer head aches. I have no pain killers around, and the light kills me. Each time I go through one of these paralyzing migraines, I have flashbacks of things unfamiliar to me. Parties, girls, guys, drinks, and the loud poping of guns. I specifically remember a guy named Parla. I can only remember his voice. I don’t know what he looks like. I don’t even know where I knew him from. Although I don’t know who he is, I can tell from the conversations I remember that he has a strong reassuring voice, and he spoke to me as if I were his child. He talks down to me. Maybe he’s my boss. Shouldn’t I be at work? Where are all the phone calls?
I don’t know what’s going on and I can’t stay in this room with this situation all over the place. I’m starting to get one of these terrible headaches again. I can’t take this! I have to lay down in another room. I leave to find that the other parts of my house are fine. I think there was no kind of struggle involved. A bit junky, but fine. There is a mans jacket resting on my couch, but I do not recognize it. Did I know him? I search the pockets for identification, but there’s nothing but a few hundred dollars… and checks! but with no names on them.
This headache is too much for me, so I decide to lay down on the couch beside the mans jacket, and I fall asleep with tears for I do not know what the situation is.

Standing in the door looking down she mumbles.
“You bastard! I knew you were up to no good when we met you. You promised me peace, and equivilence. You promised me that I would never go away. All the while, you were on her side. The two of you were against me the entire time. How could you Parla. Hey, I know how. You befriended us, and left me out to dry. But now, you’re hanging out to dry. All your lies have dried out. And now in the end, sans lies, sans authority, sans her, you can’t put me away. I’ll never really go away. You all try to help her get rid of me. Do any of you think I want to get rid of her? Why do I not get a say in this? This is bullshit! OWWWWW!
Here we go again.”

I woke up and now I was lying on my bedroom floor. Right back where I started. I scream as I run away into the bathroom. I throw up into the toilet, and I cry like a baby. I am so scared. I want help, and I need help, but there are no phones, no television, no computer, no nothing! I look out the window, and I see no one. I only see rows of houses that are all identical.
Help me!!! Help me!!!
I scream, and no one answers. By this point I don’t even care about the trouble I will be in. By this point I would leave, but there are no handles or knobs on my door, and my windows only open about 5 inches. I scream for hours, but no one is there. All this screaming is hurting my head. So I lie down in front of the widow, and I blink until I blink no longer.
“Smart girl”, she says. She’s breaking us out of here. See, I knew I liked her, but how will we do this? Hmm. There is no silverware, nothing to break these windows, and no effin door knobs. What the hell are we doing here? I’m going CRAZY in here. There is no tv, no phone, and no computer. There is no glass, no mirrors, no brushes, combs, there is nothing here that suggests this space is occupied by a human being. There aren’t even any damn pictures on the walls to stare at. What the hell was she thinking when she put us in situation? If she thought she was gonna get rid of me, guess what. She was DEAD wrong. It’s only gonna kill her first. I’m hungry. What’s in the fridge. I’m effin starving.
Hmm. Let’s have a looksie.
Eww..
Nah..
O hell naw..
What’s all this veagan crap. Who eats this shit? Not me, so I think I’ll just dump it all out.
Oh My God! Crackers! I’ll eat about 5 of these a day. Maybe then I’ll survive until we get out of this hell hole. I’ve eaten and taken a luxury shower. There is no bathtub in this house. I walk into the room where it all went down, and I am not phased. Instead, I walk right over the scene, and I get some fresh scrubs out of my drawers, and I slide into my slippers. I check the window out again as I wish I had some cigs. I am so desperate at this point, I decide to pretend I’m smoking as I think of ways to contact this chick. Thanks to my mind enhancing cigarette, I decide to write the girl a letter. I scrimmage through the house, but there are no pens or pencils. So I decide to get one of the markers from the white board by the door with the date on it. I write a message. I know she’ll read it because I crumbled it in my hand. It’s the middle of the night, so I curl up in a ball on the couch, and I fall asleep.
The morning sun beams in through the window. I have no curtains or blinds in this house. I get up from the couch and I see a crumbled piece of paper fall to the floor. I open it slowly, wondering what it is, and it reads:
You bitch!
I hope you’re happy with what you’ve done. Now look at your situation. Sorry, but your dear old Parla stood in my way. And you know the best, that I couldn’t have that. Right? So instead of trying to fight me, you might as well join the fight to get us out of here.
I dropped the paper to the ground as I got a flash back. My dear Parla was a doctor. He was my doctor. He was my friend. Angered, I fell to my knees as I pounded the floor. Why why, why!!!
What was going on? Why couldn't i remember? I felt completely helpless. I had no clue what to do, and i had no clue what was going on. How did this letter get into my hand? who wrote this? And what fight were they talking about? Just then, right after the pounding, my head began to ache. I begged god not to let me pass out. I prayed for him to send me help. I prayed through the headache. Right towards the end, I know god had answered my prayers. Right before I am about to stop, I get a flash back of something.
It is me! And Dr. Parla! We are walking down the street where all the identical houses are lined up with their perfectly placed bricks. We seemed happy. He askes me if i am sure about my decisions and if i am truly ready to complete this research study. I nod, and we continue into one of the houses.
Just then, I hear what sounded like wheels rolling down the street. I get up from my prayer posistion, and I fly to the window. Looking down, I saw a man with his face covered pushing a cart. I go ballistic! I'm calling out to him.
"Sir, Sir, Sir. Excuse me! Mister!"
He doesn't look up. He keeps walking like he doesn't notice me. I droop to the floor. Crying, i scream for him again, but i know he won't help me.
But on the other hand, i know that someone is writing me letters, and i know that someone else is out there. So, i decide to write back before my headache comes back to kill me. I find another piece of paper, and i use the marker with the date. The date now changed to March 20! Now i know that someone is out there. How did my date get changed? Someone had to have come in and changed it for me.
I run to the table, and i write:
I don't know who this is, and i don't know what you want from me, but i would appreciate it ever so specially if i could leave from this place. I don't know what i am doing here, and all i want is to go home. If you could arrange that for me, then my world would be at rest once again. All i want is to go home and be with my loved ones. How do i get out of here? And sadly, i don't understand what has happened to my dear Dr. Parla. All i do understand is that i didn't do it, and i know nothing about it.

I crumble the paper in my hand as I rock back and forh in behind the front door. I was hoping somone would hit me with the door when the came in to change my date. Exhausted, and tired of the pounding in my head, I fall asleep. Hopefully, when I wake up, this will all just be a dream.
Ah hah! She's smarter than I thought. From the looks of this letter, she must be ready to join me and get us out of here. But, once we are on the other side of this place, she won't know what's waiting for her. I pull my self out of the fetal posistion on the floor and I walk over to the couch to plan Alexa's demise. How will I do this? Hmmm... first, i'll get her on my side so we can get out of here, and then i've gotta find a way to rid this body of her.
So, I sit in this dump and think. I can't think because this smell is horrendous. This misery makes me want to scream. And I do, I scream forever. I scream to be let out of this life of suffering, but no one hears me.
Not now! I can't think of things like this. This is all simply mind over matter. It doesn't stink, I'm not lonely, and I'm not crazy. Right now, I am a mastermind. Right now, I am on top of it all.
I swear, this mentallity is one of a kind. I'm a brilliant mastermind. I've got the plan. Especially, since I'll be making it in the end.
I decide to write her back. This time I write things a little nicer. It takes me all day to come up with my brilliant plan, and transfer it into my letter. The sun is down, so I place the letter on my chest and i fall asleep.

I wake up to the brightened sun and I feel refreshed. There is another letter on my chest. This time it reads:
Hey, this is a friend. I am your only hope of getting out of here. Every day your date will be changed and every week their will be new food in your kitchen and there is ALWAYS toilet paper. Did you ever wonder how? Well, there are cameras in your livingroom and kitchen. No private areas. But this allows them to watch you. Like the other day, when you tried to fall asleep in the doorway, they saw that and they knew not to come in your room that night. That's why your date wasn't changed. I know this time is very hard for you, and I understand that you are confused, but you're gonna have to work with me if you wanna make it outta her alive. You might not remember much but your name is Alexa Baxter. My name is Alana. We used to be friends, I've known you all my life, but when highschool started, you forgot all about me. But in a lighter sense, I want you to get out of here. I know you might have MANY questions, but i promise you answers once you get on the other side of those gates down the road out your window. I need you to cooperate and do EVERYTHING i tell you. Okay? Tonight, be sure to not open your room door and fall asleep somewhere AWAY from the door. Incase you didn't know, you wanted to be here.
I am stunned silent. I don't understand ANYTHING. I feel another headache coming on, and i know that i will soon pass out, so i say some prayers and i curl up on the floor as far away from the door as possible. I am at peace when i am sleeping.
I awake with a smile on my face. It is day time and I'm finally awake again. This time i see Alexa followed the rules because I walk from the back of the house to the front door. The date is not yet changed so i know that i still have time. I plan to make an escape today. I'll try to stay up all night. I'll stay awake all day and night. When that door opens and the night watch comes in to change my date and restock my fridge, I'll hit them over the head and i'll run until i am out of this dump. Then, I'll get rid of her FOREVERRR. I allow time to pass just starring there at the wall. Then when ten o'clock hits, I "fall asleep" on the wall opposite the door. Around twelve midnight I hear some clicking at the door. I lay quietly with my eyes open. There is still clicking at the door that sounds like chains and locks and beeping codes. A man walks into the room and he grabs all my trash cans, replaces my towels, changes my date, and restocks my fridge. I am about to get up and make a run for it when i see him haul in a cart with a t.v. on it. Under the television is a VCR. I don't know what to think of this but i remain hidden opposite the door so my plan won't be busted.
Then minutes later and the figure leaves through the door, and I hear the clicking and beeping again.
I stay in that posistion lying awake the whole night. The morning sun comes and i decide to check what this t.v. and VCR is all about. I turn everything on and press PLAY. Then, there is a video, and it says:

HELLO ALEXA
THIS IS DR. PARLA. THIS VIDEO WAS DESIGNED FOR YOUR FIRST REAL WAKE UP. YES, THIS MEANS IT IS DAY 30. YOUR TRANSFORMATION SHOULD BE COMPLETE, AND RIGHT NOW ALANA SHOULD BE AWAY FOR A FEW HOURS. THE MEDICINE SHOULD HAVE GONE COMPLETELY THROUGH YOUR BODY AND PRIMED YOUR MIND FOR THE DELETION OF ITS EXTRA PERSONALITY ALANA. I KNOW YOU MAY BE A BIT CONFUSED, BUT RIGHT NOW YOU ARE IN A TESTING FACILITY FOR PERSONS WITH MULTIPLE PERSONALITIES. I HAVE BEEN YOUR DR. FOR QUITE A FEW YEARS NOW. YOU CAME TO ME WHEN YOU SAW THE PEOPLE PROTESTING MY FACILITY. FOR YEARS WE HAVE BEEN TALKING. I HAVE SPOKEN TO BOTH YOU AND ALANA. SHE DOES NOT KNOW ABOUT THIS DELETION. THAT IS WHY WE HAD TO PLACE YOU IN THIS FACILITY. THAT WAY, SHE WON'T WISE UP AND RUN YOU AWAY LIKE LAST TIME. WE HAVE CONCLUDED THAT EVERY TIME YOU HAVE A MIGRAINE, YOUR ALTERNATE PERSONALITY, ALANA, COMES TO PLAY. NOW, THE PROCEDURE WAS THAT WE GAVE YOU A COCKTAIL OF DRUGS TO DO A FEW THINGS. ONE OF THEM WAS TO ERASE YOUR MEMORIES OF COMING TO THE FACILITY. ANOTHER WAS TO KEEP YOU ON A SLEEPING PATTERN THAT WOULD REDUCE ALANA'S OUTAGE. LASTLY, THERE WERE A FEW TO BALANCE OUT A FEW THINGS IN YOUR BRAIN. AFTER YOU HAVE WATCHED THIS VIDEO, WE NEED THE REASSURANCE THAT IT IS YOU. WHEN THE FILM IS DONE, GO OVER TO THE DOOR AND KNOCK TWICE HARD AND ONCE SOFT. AFTER THE GUARDS COME TO MOVE YOU OUT, THEY WILL TAKE YOU DOWN TO A LAB WHERE WE WILL FINALLY RID YOU OF YOUR SPLIT PERSONALITY ALANA. YOU WILL SUFFER NO LONGER.

That bitch! I knew he was up to no good. That's what he was trying to inject into my arms when he thought i was Alexa that time ago. He was trying to help get rid of me. i thought we were friends, and he wanted to help me and Alexa get along. But he BETRAYED me, and i'm actually glad that i killed him dead. I am glad he is lying on that bedroom floor, and i am glad that his dead body is stinking up the whole house. I become so hysterical that i began to cry. I NEVER CRY. i usually leave that up to Alexa. But i'm so hurt and so scared of my next move backfiring that i get a terrible migraine and i am fearful of what Alexa will do after we switch over and she see's this video. Right when i go to destroy the tape, i pass out on the couch right in front of the television. Damn.
I am again dazed at how i never remember laying down where i wake up. But most suprisingly, i see a big t.v. with a VCR. i feel i must be dreaming so i slap and pinch myself a few times. realizing that there is no dream, i turn it on and watch the tape that's inside the VCR. at first, i see and elderly man. OH MY GOD. it's the guy laying day on my bedroom floor. He's telling me all this stuff about why i am here, and about someone named Alana. At the end of the film he tells me to knock on the door in a special way. I make my way towards the door when i hear someone screaming "NOOOOO!"
At that instance my head starts hurting worse than ever before. Next thing i know I hear and see the same things, but i have no control over my body. and when i try to speak, i don't hear me speaking. instead, i hear someone who sounds like me but saying some horrible things.
oh my effin god. did i just force her to switch over? this is so effin sweet. thank you GOD.

what are you doing alana? knock on the door so they can come get me and get you out of me

what? are you crazy? i'm gonna knock for myself and get YOU out of ME. you've treated me like a monster our whole life and i just want to get rid of you. i want everyone to love me like they love you. and when you get home, everyone will think i'm you and i'll finally be loved.

this will never work alana. you can never be me. no one will ever love you like they love me. they hate you, always have, and always will.

ha! that's what you think. and that's why i will always be stronger than you. you always think ahead, and i make life fit my schedule. so, i say i'm getting out of here alive, then that's what's gonna happen. why do you think i forced you to transistion with me? simply, because i'm just plain old stronger than you. get over it babe

NOOOOO!!!!

o yeah baby.. o yeah.
so i most eagerly knock on that door. and i most eagerly take my ish and roll. all the while, alexa is still screaming for me to do the right thing, but we know that's not happening.
the guards come to move me out and they mention the horrible smell. i put on the fakest tears ever and i tell them that it was alana and i didn't know what to do. they bought the whole thing.
they took me down to a lab and strapped me in. the doctors did something and started telling me how i was gonna be a new person when this was all over. i laugh inside at alexa as she's still whining and crying not to make her go away. i hear her getting louder. just then it escapes out of my mouth.
"NOOO SHE'S NOT ALEXA. I'M ALEXA. SHE'S TRICKING YOU."
and i come right back with "NOOO SHE'S LYING. SHE'S NOT ALEXA. SHE'S ALANA AND SHE'S TRYING TO TRICK YOU.
we keep this going back and forth. FINALLY, i win this battle and the doctors inject me with something cool. i can hear Alexa's voice dwindling. i laugh at her on the insed because i know she can hear me. i tell her "this is what you wanted babe. sorry it's me and not you.. haha. you know i didn't mean that.
after a half hour, the doctors tell me i am all set and they are sorry for my loss of a dear friend. i think on the inside, "yeah, and i'm sorry for what i'm about to do."
right when i am putting on my jacket and grabbing my bags, i decide to do something to these bastards for helping me go through hell. right next to my suitcase is a pair of scapels. i pick it up and i stab those two devils in the jugular vein. then squeel and i laugh hysterically. as i am about to leave, i let them know of their mistake. proud of myself, i pimp walk my flyy self right on out those lab doors and continue on my journey back to central philadelphia with my crew. i feel like snatching a purse or two. those 5 crackers a day were not enough for this chick right here. this bad chick ALANA[♥]