we were slowly drifting apart like a rubberband slowly being poped!
We were friends for as long as i could remember. Her name is mya. Me and mya were always together. When i fought she fought, when i went to the mall she went to the mall, but you get it we were always together. when we were young we had cheered for the same team. Me and mya cheered for the northwest raiders and that was when i had first meet her.when i first meet mya she was mean to me she was like a big bully to me but soon we became the best of friends. when the school year begun we both went to the same school Fitler Academics plus. Me and mya were always in the same class except in the eighth grade. when me and mya were closer than we are now we would stay on the phone talking just about anything. I remember when mya would spend weeks over my house. When mya stayed over my house my mom would always take us shopping or out to eat. At the end of eight grade close to graduation thats when we started spending less time together. In the begining of the summer me and mya spent everyday together but than soon things just suddenly started to stop. When we started to go to our new schools(high school) it was like there was no more mya. She stop calling me i stoped calling her and when i do here from her it has to be every three weeks. Me and my bestfriend are slowly drifting away.
SYREETA WROTE;
your story knda remains me of me and my best friend. butunlike you guys me & my bff remained friends for like ever.=)
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1.Explain how the writer uses the first sentence or two to grab the reader’s attention. If the opening doesn’t grab your attention, give the writer a suggestion on how to do so. you could've gave a felling of how close y'all were in the beginning.
2.What is your favorite line from the story? Why? my fav part is"when we were young we had cheered for the same team.
3.Quote the section that contains the most vivid sensory details.i don't see any sensory details.
4.What section could be improved through more detailed description including sensory details?a section that can be improved is the middle. it should make me feel sad because your friend is leaving for high school.
5.Does the ending wrap up the story?it wraps it up aliitle bit not enough details.
6.What is clever and/or lively about the ending? that in the middle i was hoping that you guys remained friends but, i guess not.
your story knda remains me of me and my best friend. butunlike you guys me & my bff remained friends for like ever.=)
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