It was second grade and I was about 7. I was really small at this age. My mom used to say I needed some meat on me but I never payed attention. I had just got back from school. I got changed into a pair of shorts and a t-shirt. These clothes were what I normally wear. I had a half day at school so I didn't eat much even though I never eat much. My mom decided to make me some pizza rolls. I love pizza rolls. After eating, I went outisde and played some football. I was really so i decided to get some water from my house across the street. Mom always told me to look both ways before crossing the street, so I did. After starting into the street, a car came speeding down. Luckily it stopped just enough so I didn't get hurt bad. However, the car still hit me and it still hurt. The car hit the side of my body and i flew across the street and landed on my knee. I could barely walk for the whole day and I was in pain. I told myself I would be okay just as long as I could walk the next day and I could. I guess miracles do happen.
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ryan thinks hes a beast cuase he got hit by a car....
your opening did not interet me as much. stick to the point.
i think the narritive was going to be about when you got hit by a car and how it felt.
things i liked best were how you went into detail about certain things in your narritive.
things i would like to know more about were what your mothers reactons were when you were hit by the car.
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