Does this opening interest you? Explain. If it does not, suggest a way to make it better.
yes, it does...it gives me the impressing that something happened

What do you think the narrative will be about?
something that happem between the character and her family

Summarize the narrative in one or two sentences.
a girl father dies and her and her sister have a hard time dealing with it

Finish this statement: Things I liked best were…
Things i liked best was the fact she left a cliff hanger.... that was cool

Complete this statement: Things I would like to know more about were
Things I would like to know more about is if she got over the sitution!