Tuesday, February 26, 2008

My Trip to New York by Olivia Williams

When I got back to Pennsylvania I wish I was back in New York. I then remember all of my trip to New York. I woke up around 8:00am on a hot summer day and washed up and took a shower. I then got dress and put on a white collar shirt, a pair of tan shorts, and some white flip flops. My hair was in a pony tail to the side. I had on some gold heart earrings with the matching chain and bracelet. After getting ready I packed my bag for a two day trip to New York. After packing I went to wake up my mom. She woke up and beginning getting ready. Shorty after getting ready she cooked me a small breakfast consisting of pancakes, bacon, eggs, and toast with a glass of orange juice on the side. Finishing my breakfast, I got my bag and went to the car. When I step outside I could feel the hot summer sun beaming on me. I could see my shining skin as the sun hit my body. When I got in the car I turned on the air, it was hot. We were off to the airport. When I got there I checked my plan ticket in and said my goodbyes to my mom. I went through security and got settled on the plane. No more than 15 minutes went by when the plane was ready to take off. When I got on the plane I went to sleep and when I woke up I was in New York. I got off the plane and went looking for my aunt Kim to pick me up. It took me like 10 minutes to find her. After finding her we went to get my bag. Then we got in the car and drove away. While in the car we talked about all kinds of stuff like school, her new job as a fashion designer, and much more. Then she ask was I hungry and I said yes. We went to eat at this stand. We both had a spice of pizza. It was good. After eating we went to Times Square. It was so amazing. Although it was not all lit up like at night, it still looked wonder. It was so big I thought I was going to get lost. After just looking around for a minute I decided to explore. Me and my aunt went around Times Square looking at all the amazing sites to see. Since it was my first time there I thought it would be best if I took pictures. I took pictures of mostly everything. I ask my aunt since I was tried could we go home. When I stepped in the house it was like stepping into heaven. The light from the beaming sun lit up everything making it look like you were in the sky. Her house consist of the color blue that I could tell was her own. She showed me to the guest bedroom and I settled in and went to bed. When I woke up around 10:00am I could smell the food she cooked for me. She cooked oatmeal, eggs. bacon, and toast with a glass of apple juice on the side, my favorite. After eating I went to pack my stuff because I was living today. I packed my stuff and went to the car. We decided to go shopping. We went to many stores that I didn't even know the name of. After shopping for hours it was time to live. When we got to the airport I checked my ticket in and said my goodbyes to my aunt. I told my aunt that I will be back and don't forget me. After that I went through security and got on the plane back to Pennsylvania. When I got off the plane I wished I was back in New York.

1 comment:

vante_crazy said...

well olivia tells me how she wished she back in new york. This shows me that what ever she did in the story must of been very nice.

My favorite line in the essay was when she explaining to me how her aunts house was so heavenly.

I cant actually quote it but when she expllains to me what her aunts house looked like and how good her coooking smelled to her

Well the only part that could be improved are the mispelled parts in the whole essay.

Pretty much she does wrap up the end of her essay I understand it and everything.

Its clever in the end cause of how she wishes she was back in new york. This tells you that she must of had a wonderful time.