The ground was wet and the air was hot.My dog wass painting as I told him to go to the bathroom. I stood ther waiting and sudenly I screamed,"No Gus-gus No!"
As he stood in the bushes peeing a man walked up and bumped into me. He said exsuce me and kept on moving. I guess he didn't see my almost 200 lb. dog in the wild bushes because he turned around, walked back, and tried to get my phone number. Before we both knew it, Gus-gus ran around the bush, the leash wrapped around my anckles and the big football playing manwas running and sreaming like a little girl. I had never let the leash goso I was right there behind him sliding on the ground. If I would have let the leash go Gus-gus wolud not be alive today. I screamed and yelled for my dog to stop, but he didn't . He kept on running and I was still sliding down the dirty sidewalk. After he relized he was carring deadweight, he stoped and turned around. He walked to the my end of the leash and licked my face and he pushed my head with his. I was furious.
After I had gotten up off the grund, I pulled his leash and dragged him in the house.
"Get in the house!",I screamed.
"What's the problem?" My uncle asked.
Gus dragged me down the street chasing after some man!" I screamed.
"HA HA HA HA HA!" He laughed.
"UHHHHHH!" I screamed," Get on the pourch."
"Okay Raveen, tell me what happened." He said.
My dog cried as I kicked him out the house.
I told my uncle," I was told yo walk the dog and let him pee."
"Yes." he said.
" But that is not happened." I answered.
I continued to tell him my story. As I talked he laughed and laughed until he almost cried.
"Your mad because of what."he asked.
"I was dragged down the street by a dog chasing a man and because of the scar on my arm I wil never be able to get a boyfriend!" I exclaimed.
"Raven hush," he said,"Now lets go clean up your arm and you cannot be mad at Gus for protecting you."
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Explain how the writer uses the first sentence or two to grab the reader’s attention. If the opening doesn’t grab your attention, give the writer a suggestion on how to do so.
1.What is your favorite line from the story? Why?
"after he realized he was carry dead weight"...its funny 2 me
2.Quote the section that contains the most vivid sensory details.
"the ground was wet and the air was hot"
3.What section could be improved through more detailed description including sensory details?
she could of describled her dog better
4.Does the ending wrap up the story?
no...its leaves kind of a cliff hanger
5.What is clever and/or lively about the ending?
It was an exciting ending
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