It Was Mid March 2006 , My Sister had got married , it was at the wedding reception when a Car rode up on the block and out came Him . He Had On Tight Cut Jeans and a shirt that was gray with red stripes and some gray chucks . He had a devious kinda look like he was up to something . his hair was dark black with waves . His eyes was a dark brown color . I Was Just Staring at him as if someone was robbing a bank. I Had On a white church like shirt with a black medium cut skirt and some black high heels shoes that hurt my feet . I Had a silver bracelet and my hair was long and black but i had it tied up with a clip . I was playing the x box 360 with my nephews till , he came in . He came in and sat down on the couch my sister introduce us . After that i Ran Up stairs to change , i had put on some Jeans with Designs on It in black and Peach and a Peach Shirt With Some Black and White Adidas .My hair i let out to hang with a white band . my eyebrows was arched and i hand on shiny lip gloss it shined more then the sun . i had a peach kinda ring and perfume that smelled like peaches and cream. i ran back down stairs , and he looked at me as if i was a new action movie .
i Smiled and He Did the same
my sister said " Hey Shardae Why Don't you talk to him ".
but i was too scared.
the party was almost over and he was about leave .
My sister and i walked him to the car to say bye .
I Said Bye and i was sad because i didn't get to talk to him .
The next week my sister was heading for work .
when she got there his mother was there ( they work together )
My sister told his mom i liked him so my sister called me and told me she told his mom . i was shocked and nervous , My Phone Rung it was HIM ! he got my number from my sister . Without me knowing How Rude ! : )
Well we Began To Talk and Get To Know Each other .
On April 1st That's When I Felt A Breeze in the air , me and him was and us ! yup a couple ! He Was the nicest and intelligent person i ever met , He made me laugh and show a new side of myself he brought out SHARDAE the real me , i wasn't shy anymore and i had all the confidence in the world and no one could stop me .
I Was Glad To be with him it change me a lot i broke out my shell .
and even though were not together now this day i still Remember that feeling of confidence and beauty i wish i still had it.
It Was One of the most biggest changes in my life .
He still my friend but were not that close .
I'll Never Forget How i felt when i was with MARCUS .
i Smiled and He Did the same
my sister said " Hey Shardae Why Don't you talk to him ".
but i was too scared.
the party was almost over and he was about leave .
My sister and i walked him to the car to say bye .
I Said Bye and i was sad because i didn't get to talk to him .
The next week my sister was heading for work .
when she got there his mother was there ( they work together )
My sister told his mom i liked him so my sister called me and told me she told his mom . i was shocked and nervous , My Phone Rung it was HIM ! he got my number from my sister . Without me knowing How Rude ! : )
Well we Began To Talk and Get To Know Each other .
On April 1st That's When I Felt A Breeze in the air , me and him was and us ! yup a couple ! He Was the nicest and intelligent person i ever met , He made me laugh and show a new side of myself he brought out SHARDAE the real me , i wasn't shy anymore and i had all the confidence in the world and no one could stop me .
I Was Glad To be with him it change me a lot i broke out my shell .
and even though were not together now this day i still Remember that feeling of confidence and beauty i wish i still had it.
It Was One of the most biggest changes in my life .
He still my friend but were not that close .
I'll Never Forget How i felt when i was with MARCUS .
2 comments:
Does this opening interest you? Explain. If it does not, suggest a way to make it better.
the opening does interest me beacuse I'll like to know what the boy and your sister's personility during the wedding.
What do you think the narrative will be about?
I think the narative will be a bout her sister and her sister's new husband.
Summarize the narrative in one or two sentences.
This narrative makes u think its about one thing when it is really about another.
Finish this statement: Things I liked best were…
the things I liked best about was the way u discribed wat Marcus wore and wat he look like.
Complete this statement: Things I would like to know more about were…
The one thing I will lie to know more about is how u acted when u found out that ur sister gave marcus ur number without ur consent.
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