Friday, February 8, 2008

My Surprise Party

It is the year 2000,and today is April 20.My biirthday!! I awake to see my family in my face singing,"happy birthday',to me. I begin to walk down the stairs and the smell of the breakfast completely knocks me off my feet. I started to float to he kitchen to see my favorite, pancakes,but not any odinary ones. These pancakes were top with strawberries covered in whipped cream. My dad kisses me on my forehead while I stuff my face. Before I can finish eating the wonderful feast my parents sneak out the house.Looking at their faces I knew something was fishy. My sister pulls me away from my plate to finish doing my half done hair.My sister, Nicole, put my hair in black and red individuals. I never knew I could feel this special. My cousin and I discuss the presents I might receive like the Bratz make up head. At that time I was completely in love with dolls. But soon grew out of it. My sister tells me that my parents went to by my clothes. She told me it was a secret so don't mention it to mommy. My parets return with about four heavy bags of clothes and of course I had to act surprised. I go through the bag and one set of clohes caught my eye. It is these gorgeous navy blue capris with stars on the back. I picked up a beautiful orange shirt with white and navy blue stripes. I tried the set on and notice the shirt was backless. At that moment I knew that I was in love with clothes. For about 2 hours I felt like Cindrella but no ball to go to. My sister and my cousin Margret came to pick me and the little kids up. I was so devastated because I had nothing to do. Walking into my Aunt Faye's house everyone screamed "SURPRISE"! Tears of joy came down my face and I was soooo happy. All of my family came to greet me at the door. Walking more into the house I notice a horst of toys by the door. The famous Bratz head was staring me in my face and I knew I was in heaven. Walking into the kitchen I smell everthing delicious. My aunt made sweet potatoes with marshmallows all over it. My mom made fried chicken and the smell absolutely capture my soul. I bega to walk into the backyard and it was covered in decorations. Outside I see a present covered in a sheet. I moved the sheet to reveal a two wheeled bicycle my absolute first. In the backround I hear my favorite music playing which is the party music. The only kind! The looks on my cousins faces were priceless. The best day of my life was on April 20, 2000. This day I will never forget!

1 comment:

R33na said...

i really liked your begining. the things i liked best was your descripitive writing but things that i would like to no is how old did you turn and what was you wearing when you woke up and if you didnt alredy say what did you wear to your aunts house.